The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the amount of fresh
fish
in Perth, Australia between 2004
to 2014. Overall
, local
caught Change the adjective
locally
fish
was more than imported fish
throughout of
the years and there was an increase in Change preposition
apply
total
amount of Add an article
the total
a total
fish
.
The first notable point is that local catches of fish
is
increased from 2004 to 2014. Looking more closely, it Unnecessary verb
apply
was begin
in 2004 at 2677.7 metric Change the verb form
began
tons
, then
constantly rose to 8136.2 metric tons
in 2008. However
, there was a slightly
decrease in the quantities of local Change the adverb
slight
fish
between 2009 to 2012, but then
grew up to 5031.9 metric tons
by the end of the year in 2014.
On the other hand
, about
imported Change preposition
for
fish
, the highest year was 2012. It was recorded at 464.5 metric tons
in 2004, then
rose to a staggering 1203.7 in 2012. Then
, it went down to 782.7 metric tons
in 2014.
The total amount of fish
was 3142.2 metric tons
in 2004, then
rose to 8949 in 2009. After that, it decreased to 5498.6 in 2012,
and finished at 5814.7 in 2014.Remove the comma
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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