The table below shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features.

The table below shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features.
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The given table provides information about the proportion of different mobile phone features which people utilize between 2006 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is evident that making calls was highly used as a feature all over the timeframe, which is followed by sending and receiving text messages. Moving to a detailed analysis, the share of making calls was exactly 100% in 2006 and 2008,
however
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, it decreased very slightly to 99% in 2010,
whereas
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figures for taking photos and sending and receiving text messages followed an upward trend, they were two-thirds and just over 70% respectively, and increased to 76% and 79% in 2010. Turning to the percentages of playing games and playing music, they both represented just over one-fifth in 2006 and went up to 42 %(former) and 18%(latter) in 2008.
At the end
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of the period, the former witnessed a decline of 1%, with the latter climbing gradually to 26%. With regard to the remaining indicators, there was no information about the proportions of searching the Internet and recording video at the beginning of the period.
Nonetheless
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, in 2008 the figure for the first one accounted for 41 % of the total,
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that for the second one was just over one-tenth, surging to 73% and 35% in turn in 2010.
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