The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.
The three pie charts illustrate the proportion of three types of
career
in Australian Fix the agreement mistake
careers
graduate
in 1980, 1990, and 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
Overall
, the most common career type was working, which accounted for over two-fifths in all three years, while
unemployment generated the least
ratio in Australia.
Turning to the details, Correct word choice
lowest
emplyment
consisted of 40% of the portal in 1980 and Correct your spelling
employment
have
been steadily increasing to 50% and 55% respectively in 1990 and 2000. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
On the other hand
, the percentage which
Correct pronoun usage
who
enter
higher education started at 50%, but it slumped down to 38% and showed a slight decrease to 37% in 2000.
Wrong verb form
entered
Lastly
, the least common kind of working was unemployment and showed a moderate rising
to 12% in 1990. Afterwards, the figure will again drop to roughly 8%.Replace the word
rise
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