As English becomes more widespread as a lingua franca , there is concern that the values and culture of the English-speaking world will displace native values and cultures. To what extent is this fear justified?

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There is no doubt that
English
is becoming increasingly important as a
language
of international communication in fields of science, trade, entertainment and so on. So,
people
have the argument that whether
English
will alter a country’s nature. In my point of view,
this
fear is precise but I believe that
people
can manage to get rid of
this
situation. In
this
essay, I will outline what is the reason I think so. It is true that throughout human’s history,
English
is becoming enriched and steadily used almost every edge on earth,
while
some
language
is being died out, changed or even replaced. Even in the ancient Greek, hieroglyph was widely spoken but recently, it has already disappeared and only traces are left behind . In to some extent,
this
process may be inevitable.
However
, there are examples in many nations always trying to preserve their languages and even revive it under threat. Ainu tribe - Japan,
for example
, have been preserved by Japanese government policy on social media, propagating their specific, and so on.
Language
actually is one way of identifying a nation.
This
can help
people
be strong in adversity. Where
this
sense of identity and cohesion has been lost,
for example
in Malaysia,
people
are speaking only Malaysian, some can only speaking Indian or Chinese
instead
of having a
language
in common.
This
leads to problems: low self-esteem, lack of confidence, and lost of initiative. Retaining the
language
of a community often means that other forms of culture are exist and remained through : songs, literature, story and local traditions.
Therefore
, it will be passed down through generations.
However
, in the innovation society,
English
only serve to make human’s life becomes more convenient in trade, tourism and so on.
However
, it doesn’t bring any means in terms of tradition, culture and nature. To summarize,
English
plays a vital role in globalism to fulfill human’s demands. After all, it cannot replace any country’s value and culture because
language
displays a nation’s identity and tradition. In every country’s government
also
has had gradually high awareness of the importance of their
language
and tried to protect theirs from any thread.
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