In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Citizens find themselves in danger

although

the number of aggravated faults

are

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going down in many nations because we can hear more about

the

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crimes

from social

media

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than ever before and we started to see new types of

crimes

which cannot be prosecuted under

current

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law systems of the countries. So as to solve

this

problem, I think

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process should be improved and governments should make new laws which

binds

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the offenders of

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untypical

crimes

. One of the reasons behind the

feeling

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of those people emerges from the information overload caused by

media

platforms. We are now able to hear certain

wrong doings

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women and men face

from

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simply scrolling down on applications we have on our

phone

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and we usually focus on the act itself, rather than focusing on the

result

of it,

such

as the

inprisonment

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imprisonment

or trial phase of the offender.

This

makes us think that someone is

commiting

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committing

a crime and walking away with it. The other reason

of

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the worry of the citizens is new

crimes

that are not able to be subject to a criminal investigation because of the outdated law system in that country. Take

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protection area,

for example

, before the

last

10 years, nations did not have efficient and applicable law norms back

then

and

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result

of

this

, companies

have

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sold our information to other entities and identity

thiefs

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thieves

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have stolen

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our personal data and made money from them. In order to make

ones

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relieve

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, people themselves can try not to impulsively react to the information they

saw

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on certain news platforms and search

the

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consequences and final

result

of the crime because most of the

crimes

are being prosecuted and punished especially if they are known enough to

heard

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by a person outside. To be able to punish the criminals who have made certain

wrong doings

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wrongdoings

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, governments ought to have specific articles in their codes for those actions and those actions need to be searched and stated carefully.

For instance

, a

comitee

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committee

that identifies the new types of faults in

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society can be established and with the results of their survey, governments can adopt new norms in their criminal codes to punish the offenders and

as a

result

, individuals can feel more relaxed about the unpunished ones in the environment they live in.

To conclude

, even though the nations have less severe

harrastment

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harassment

levels today, individuals still feel in danger because of the lack of data they consume from

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social

media

about certain

offends

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and the unnamed offences in the country. I believe with the implementation of laws that

covers

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those acts and the effort of individuals

about knowing

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to know

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more about the

story

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stories

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they learn from

media

, citizens can feel more relaxed about the threat level in the area they live in.