A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you in response to the article ‘
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the influenced me most’ printed in the
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issue of your magazine, as it was stated there that you would be waiting for readers’ contributions. Having noticed
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, I couldn't have failed
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an opportunity to share my experience. So, the
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that literally turned my world upside down is called "Nina", by an Italian author writing under the pen name of Moony Witcher. The
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was about a girl who suddenly found out that her grandfather had not only been a great alchemist but had
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kept saving the world from an evil mage. And it was her turn to take up his task and save all the children's dreams and fantasies from complete extinction. I was twelve when I cracked
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open and I was completely lost in an interesting plot and a breathtaking philosophy concerning God and Evil, Creation and Destruction, Everything and Nothing.
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had a great influence on me as a writer, it encouraged me to try writing fantasy stories and made me
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person that I am now. I would advise reading
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to everyone from age 8 to 16, as it is sure to be very beneficial for children's upbringing and to teach them some good things in a very interesting way. Best regards,
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Structure
Continue to structure your letters with clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a different aspect of the topic. This makes your letters easy to follow.
Engagement
Be sure to engage your readers with personal anecdotes and vivid descriptions. This adds depth to your writing and makes it more compelling.
Vocabulary and Complexity
Keep varying your sentence structures to maintain the reader's interest throughout the letter. It helps in creating a more dynamic and engaging narrative.
Task Response
You've successfully described the book, its impact on you, and its potential impact on others, fulfilling the task requirement excellently.
Organization
Your letter is very well organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion which makes it a coherent and cohesive piece.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • influenced
  • contributions
  • readers
  • 'The Alchemist'
  • Paulo Coelho
  • embarks
  • journey
  • personal legend
  • valuable
  • life lessons
  • inspiring
  • pursue
  • themes
  • following one's heart
  • seeking adventure
  • embracing the unknown
  • resonate
  • wide range
  • potential
  • inspire
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