Write about the following topic: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
In the current time,
people
tend to judge the value of other people
by their position in society and wealth. Traditional aspects such
as kindness, honour, honesty, and trust do not seem to be important anymore. I agree, but not completely. In this
essay, it will be discussed both sides and some examples to illustrate this
position.
Firstly
, it is necessary to say that this
behaviour has been true since ancient times. Materials possession have been used in the History of human beings to define the importance of a person
. Wealthy people
have a huge influence on politic
, economic, law, and religious issues. Economical power is a key component in every election or way to choose a government. Replace the word
political
For example
, kings, imperators, prime ministers, and presidents around the world have been always supported by rich people
. Without money
, neither a congressman achieves a position.
Another example to illustrate the power of money
is when someone commits a crime. If the person
has no money
to pay a good lawyer, probably he or she will go to jail quickly. On the other hand
, a rich person
will linger to the maximum judgment and sometimes will be declared not guilty. Even when this
wealthy person
is declared guilty, the time in prison will be shorter.
In conclusion, despite the cultural aspects said
before, nowadays, Verb problem
mentioned
this
trend is changing. For instance
, today, young people
prefer spending less money
in
things Change preposition
on
such
as housing, cars, technology and clothes than in the past. More and more people
are giving more worth to features like honesty, bravery, integrity, and trust. I believe that new generations will make better choices and give more value to simple things.Submitted by fmulato on
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Structure
Continue to develop well-structured arguments, ensuring each paragraph has a clear main idea supported by examples.
Content
Maintain a balance in your essay by addressing both sides of the argument before reaching a well-reasoned conclusion.
Vocabulary
Expand your range of vocabulary for expressing agreement or disagreement partially. Words and phrases that nuanced your position could enhance the complexity.
Grammar
Keep using a variety of sentence structures to articulate complex ideas clearly and effectively.
Balanced Approach
Articulated a balanced view by addressing both sides of the argument.
Use of Examples
Effective use of examples to support your arguments.
Conclusion
A clear conclusion summarising your stance.
Structure
Good logical structure and organization of the essay.
Your opinion
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