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The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent

The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent
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The given table illustrates
estimated
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the estimated
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cost
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 for
three
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 environmental projects aiming at maintaining forest lands over the next five
years
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 , and the pie chart depicts the anticipated
first
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first-year
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year
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 budget for the projects.
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, the highest
cost
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 is predicted for the
South -east
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Southeast
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Asian
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 forest
sustanability
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sustainability
project
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 compared to the
West
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African
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 and Central
American
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 estimates. In detail, the anticipated amount for the Southeast
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 work in
first
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year
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 is 30
million
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 dollars and it is nearly
three
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 times higher compared to the
West
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African
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 plan for the same
year
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.
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, during the second
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year
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year,
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 all
three
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 projects are estimated to have less in
cost
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 with 20
million
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 for the Southeast
Asian
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 one and 12
million
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to
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 the
Cental
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Central
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American
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 ,followed by 7.5
millions
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to
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for
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 the
West
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African
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project
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.
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, during the
last
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three
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years
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 the
west
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african
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 and the Central
American
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 ones,
estimated
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 to reduce in
cost
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 with nearly
athe
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the
same value for all
three
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years
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 ; by
contrary
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contrast
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 the Southeast
Asian
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project
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 is estimated to
more
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be more
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 costly in
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last
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the last
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threee
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three
years
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 with 50
million
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 dollars for both 4th and 5th
year
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, and which is 10 times more costlier than the Central
American
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project
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 for the same
years
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. In
related
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 to the projected budget for the first
year
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 in all
three
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 areas ,half of it
allocated
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was allocated
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 for
the
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apply
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salaries, and
mere
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a mere
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 equal
10
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to 10
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% for training and office
expences
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expenses
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, and the rest,
modest
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a modest
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 30% for the set-up
cost
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, three, years, year, asian, project, west, african, american, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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