The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent

The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent
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cost
for
three
environmental projects aiming at maintaining forest lands over the next five
years
, and the pie chart depicts the anticipated
first
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year
budget for the projects.
Overall
, the highest
cost
is predicted for the
South -east
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Southeast
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Asian
forest
sustanability
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sustainability
project
compared to the
West
African
and Central
American
estimates. In detail, the anticipated amount for the Southeast
Asian
work in
first
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the first
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year
is 30
million
dollars and it is nearly
three
times higher compared to the
West
African
plan for the same
year
.
However
, during the second
year
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year,
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all
three
projects are estimated to have less in
cost
with 20
million
for the Southeast
Asian
one and 12
million
to
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the
Cental
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Central
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American
,followed by 7.5
millions
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to
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the
West
African
project
.
Furthermore
, during the
last
three
years
the
west
african
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African
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and the Central
American
ones,
estimated
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to reduce in
cost
with nearly
athe
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the
same value for all
three
years
; by
contrary
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contrast
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the Southeast
Asian
project
is estimated to
more
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costly in
last
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the last
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threee
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three
years
with 50
million
dollars for both 4th and 5th
year
, and which is 10 times more costlier than the Central
American
project
for the same
years
. In
related
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to the projected budget for the first
year
in all
three
areas ,half of it
allocated
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was allocated
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for
the
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salaries, and
mere
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a mere
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equal
10
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% for training and office
expences
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expenses
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, and the rest,
modest
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a modest
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30% for the set-up
cost
.
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