In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
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with, in today's fast-paced orld, we are encountering a sedentary lifestyle. It can be experienced either at home or workplace Linking Words
due to
technological advancements.In fact, gizmos make our lives comfortable by doing our day-to-day work immediately. Linking Words
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they switch to techy devices. Linking Words
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, around three decades ago, household activitieslike washing and cleaning were done by themselves.But, today, those activities are done by electronic improvements Linking Words
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as washing machines and vacuum cleaners thanks technological advancements and the only thing to do is just switch them on or give them a verbal command.
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This
can be identified as a massive problem among youngsters.In fact , adolescents are get involved in junk Linking Words
foods
when they are schooling and most the teens are experiencing obesity and are not physically healthy. Use synonyms
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According to
the records of physicians around the world, 34% of school children aged between 14-18 , are overweight and 10% of them have diabetes or heart diseases.
To address the aforementioned issues, Linking Words
people
have to switch from sedentary lives to healthy lifestyles.To do that, Use synonyms
people
should away from overreliance on technological devices and get involved in regular exercises. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they have to complete their household activities by themselves as far as they can and they are able to participate in walking or running to improve their cardiovascular Linking Words
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Moreover
, schoolchildren always should be guided to have a balanced diet with more nutrition and they should be advised to escape from unhealthy Linking Words
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related programs.
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those consequences can be mitigated by keeping them away as far as they can and doing their household activities by themselves and increasing physical exercises and adding more nutrients for children's portions.Use synonyms
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