The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture displays the circulation of
carbon
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dioxide in nature.
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,
carbon
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naturally cycles through the ecosystem via sun,
plants
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, waters and animals,
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emissions from
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activities may alter
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procedure.
Carbon
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dioxide in the air is absorbed by the oceans and vegetation on Earth.
Plants
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combine CO2 and sunlight to produce nutrition for themselves via photosynthesis. Organic
carbon
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enters the ground in two ways. The first is through waste matter from
plants
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and the second way is when the bodies of
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died
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organisms decay.
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, it becomes fossils and fossil fuels by accumulating in the soil
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by
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. In general, the breathing from animals and
plants
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is released
to
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the atmosphere and forms a new
carbon
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cycle again.
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, the accumulation in Earth's crust is burned for energy by
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and there are tremendous emissions
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into the air because of large amounts, only
tiny
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a tiny
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part of them can go into the cycle.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, plants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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