The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture displays the circulation of
carbon
dioxide in nature.
Overall
, carbon
naturally cycles through the ecosystem via sun, plants
, waters and animals, while
emissions from humans'
activities may alter Fix the agreement mistake
human'
this
procedure.
Carbon
dioxide in the air is absorbed by the oceans and vegetation on Earth. Plants
combine CO2 and sunlight to produce nutrition for themselves via photosynthesis. Organic carbon
enters the ground in two ways. The first is through waste matter from plants
and the second way is when the bodies of Replace the word
dead
died
organisms decay. Replace the word
dead
Furthermore
, it becomes fossils and fossil fuels by accumulating in the soil years
by Fix the agreement mistake
year
years
. In general, the breathing from animals and Fix the agreement mistake
year
plants
is released to
the atmosphere and forms a new Change preposition
into
carbon
cycle again. However
, the accumulation in Earth's crust is burned for energy by human
and there are tremendous emissions Fix the agreement mistake
humans
emit
into the air because of large amounts, only Wrong verb form
emitted
tiny
part of them can go into the cycle.Correct article usage
a tiny
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