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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbear island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbear island between 2010 and 2017.
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The figure displays how many
people
 visited Carribean
Island
 from the
period
 2010 to 2017. The line graph
divided
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is divided
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 into three
part
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parts
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 which are the number of
people
stayed
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staying
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in
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on
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 land,
in
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on
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 cruise ships and
its
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the
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 total. Generally, there was an
overall
 upward trend going on over the whole reported
period
 which went 350% from originally 1
million
 to 3,5
million
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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To begin
, for
the
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those
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one
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who
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 stayed at the
cruishing
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crushing
cruising
 ships, there was an
overall
 inclination from approximately a quarter
million
 in 2010 rose
four fold
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at the end
 of
period
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the period
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 with 2
million
people
 in 2017.
Initially
, the number was lower than that of on
island
,
however
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however,
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 it was turned in the
period
 2015 to 2016. As for the tourists
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who resided
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resided
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residing
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 on the
island
, the
amount
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number
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 of
people
was in
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apply
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overall
 increased 2 times from around
three
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a
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 quarter of
million
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a million
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in
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at
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 the beginning of the
period
.
However
, there was a fluctuation since it plateaued in 2013 to 2015 at one and
half
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a half
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million
 and
then
slighlty
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slightly
decline
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declined
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 in 2016 before went back
at
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to
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 the same level in 2017. All in all, the number of visitors had risen for both two groups with slight fluctuation along the way. The visitors who stayed on the
island
was
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were
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 superior
than
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to
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 that of on the ships,
however
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however,
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 it
was
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apply
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overlapped in 1 and half years before the end of the
period
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however, overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, island, period, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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