The charts below show the changes in ownership ofelectrical appliances andamount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership ofelectrical appliances andamount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts represent the difference in the
amount
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number
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of household appliances, including washing
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machine
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machines
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,
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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, and
vacuum
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cleaner
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cleaners
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, that were owned and the number of
hours
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spent doing house
chore
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chores
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per week in a country
during
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from
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1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, the amount of
the
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apply
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appliances apparently
increase
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increased
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during the span of a century, with the washing
machine
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slowly
incline
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inclining
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,
while
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the fridge and the
vacuum
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has
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have
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a
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an
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enormous jump in
the
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apply
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popularity.
However
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, the housework
require
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requires
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less
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fewer
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hours
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over time.
According to
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the graph, the washing
machine
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used to be the most popular in 1920, with 40% of
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the household
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household
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households
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had
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having
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the
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a
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machine
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, followed by the
vacuum
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with 30%.
Then
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, the fridge and
vacuum
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started to surge hugely to 100% in the
year
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years
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1980 and 2000 respectively. Meanwhile, the washing
machine
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On the other hand
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, the amount of time for doing chores was fifty
hours
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per week in 1920 and it steadily
decline
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declined
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until 1960 to twenty
hours
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per week. The number
continue
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continued
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to decrease with only approximately ten
hours
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in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, vacuum, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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