the chart shows that male and female teacheres in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

the chart shows that male and female teacheres in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The given chart depicts the percentage of male and female
teachers
in six distinguished types of educational settings in the UK in 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that women hold the lion's share of nursery/
Pre-school
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preschool
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and primary school
while
men are responsible for private training institutes and
university
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universities
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far more than women.
To begin
with, women occupy the vast majority of pre-school
teachers
and primary
teachers
with a massive around 95% for both.
On the contrary
, men make up a tiny majority of those figures below 10%.
Next,
the proportion of female
teachers
in secondary school is more than 10% than that of male
teachers
around 55%. Moving on to the other categories, the number of female
teachers
in college is as same as male
teachers
about 50%. Around 60% of male
teachers
in private training institutes which is more than 15% of female
teachers
.
Lastly
, most university
teachers
are male with 70%
while
female
teachers
account for less than twice that.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational setting
  • gender disparity
  • workforce distribution
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • further education
  • higher education
  • adult education
  • trends
  • implications
  • representation
  • gender roles
  • societal views
  • significant differences
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