The maps below show the Happy Valley Shopping Center in 1982 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps highlight data about the changes in Happy Valley Shopping Center in two separate years (1982 and 2012).
Overall
, it is clearly seen that a great deal of development and renovation was
taken Verb problem
has
place
at this
centre
, including getting a parking lot and places for eating.
Looking into detail, in 1982 there was a lake in the west of the centre
, whereas
it had changed location to furniture retail which used to be in the east of the centre
. A lobby area also
was replaced its place
with an entrance to the shopping centre
. As for the east side of the centre
, there were three divided places, including sports, electronic and furniture stores. The electronic and sports stores were replaced their places to food stores. The food store was transformed from its place
to the southeast of the centre
.
Another striking change is that a parking lot was introduced to a narrow road’s destination. Regarding the entertainment area, toilets, and trees, they were maintained in the same place
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