The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The table illustrates the changes in the
number
of people
who traveled
internationally in 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005, respectively.
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travelled
Overall
,people
in Europe travelled the most, and the least travelled people
were from the Middle East.
The average number
of people
who travelled in 1990 increased significantly from 448.9 million
to 693.7 million
in 2005. Europe had the highest number
of visitors in all four years, with an average of 280.2 million
in 1990, 390.3 million
in 1995, 393.2 million
in 2000 and 400.2 million
in 2005, respectively.
The number
of visitors skyrocketed to 135.8 million
in Asia and the Pacific, which was the highest figure compared to all the previous years. International wanderers from 1990 to 2005 in countries like Africa and the Middle East ranged from 9.8 million
to 28.7 million
. On the other hand
, there was a modest decline in the number
of pilgrims in America, with an average of only 113.2 million
in 2005 , compared to 80.5 million
in 1990.Submitted by crpnivedya.prasannan on
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