The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing and businessand financial service-to the uk economy in the twentieth century
The graph illustrates the amount of impacts of various parts ranging from farming to manufacturing in monetary matters of
UK
in the Correct article usage
the UK
last
century.
Overall
,The bar chart show
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shows
agriculture
portion had reduced Correct article usage
the agriculture
while
business
and services sector effect increased.
In1900, agriculture had the most effect with 49 Correct article usage
the business
percent
per area among other competitors and in Change the spelling
per cent
second
stage was manufacturing by 43 Change the article
the second
percent
and in the Change the spelling
per cent
last
part followed by business and financial service which affected about 5 percent
.
After five decades, farming reached Change the spelling
per cent
peak
of 50 Add an article
the peak
a peak
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
whereas
it had a remarkable dropped to 15 percent
in 1975 and Change the spelling
per cent
this
downward trend followed
by under 5 Add a missing verb
was followed
percent
in 2000. Change the spelling
per cent
However
,business
experienced Add an article
the business
and
increasing Correct your spelling
an
tend
with a double Correct your spelling
trend
percent
in 1950 and a noticeable rose to 25 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1975. Change the spelling
per cent
finally
, in 2000 finance services climb
to 35 Wrong verb form
climbed
percent
.
Manufacturing saw a reduction trend during
100 years and in 1950, it had a slight decrease to 38 Change preposition
over
percent
and it continued in 1975 when production had 30 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and in 2000 it showed Change the spelling
per cent
significant
decline to 18 Add an article
a significant
percent
of influence on Change the spelling
per cent
economy
.Add an article
the economy
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