The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing and businessand financial service-to the uk economy in the twentieth century

The graph illustrates the amount of impacts of various parts ranging from farming to manufacturing in monetary matters of

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century.

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agriculture

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the agriculture

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portion had reduced

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business

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the business

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and services sector effect increased. In1900, agriculture had the most effect with 49

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per area among other competitors and in

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stage was manufacturing by 43

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and in the

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part followed by business and financial service which affected about 5

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. After five decades, farming reached

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of 50

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it had a remarkable dropped to 15

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in 1975 and

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downward trend

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by under 5

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in 2000.

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,

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the business

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experienced

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increasing

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trend

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with a double

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in 1950 and a noticeable rose to 25

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in 1975.

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, in 2000 finance services

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to 35

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. Manufacturing saw a reduction trend

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100 years and in 1950, it had a slight decrease to 38

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and it continued in 1975 when production had 30

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and in 2000 it showed

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a significant

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decline to 18

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of influence on

economy

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the economy

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