The chart shows the total distance travelled passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000

The chart shows the total distance travelled passengers on five types of transport in the UK between 1990 and 2000
The chart illustrates how long in hundred
kilometers
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British users of five transportation methods moved in 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, the total distance
traveled
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in 2000 increased compared to a decade before.
Additionally
, buses and trains were the most common means of
transport
in both years. To commence with,
airplane's
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aeroplane's
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figure
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witnessed an insignificant increase from 1990 to 2000,
however
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passengers
traveled
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travelled
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the least of the five types of
transport
.
In contrast
, bicycles and motorbikes decreased after the same period, down to half of their initial values. All three means of
transport
only showed less than 5% in both surveyed years. Regarding the other types of transportation, buses and trains are used the longest in terms of distance by their passengers, taking nearly
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half and a third of the total value.
Besides
, both
also
experienced a similar trend compared to
air's
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figure. All five types of
transport
left the total distance gained 10 after a decade, from 100 in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport with synonyms.
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