The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.

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how many people travel abroad to five continents in four different periods (1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005).

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, it can clearly be seen that all of the visitors rose throughout the given period.

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, more than half of tourists came to Europe

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the Middle East was the lowest. In terms of the three biggest numbers of visitors, Europe, America, and Asia started at 280.2, 80.5, and 60.2 in 1990, respectively. The figure in Europe experienced a steep increase in the following five years to 390.3 and peaked at 400.2 in 2005. For Asia Pacific, the figure climbed consistently to 135.8 and surpassed America which fell to 113.2 in the

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period. Regarding the other two places, Africa and the Middle East recorded below 30.0 in the total of tourists. Africa started at 18.2 in 1995 and the number grew more than 50 percent to 28.7 in 2005. For the lowest of tourists, the Middle East had 9.8

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in 1990 and the number witnessed a significant growth of 6 for over 15 years.

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