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Some people belive that reading is advantageous to enhance our english skills and people should spend more time in it. how far are you agree or disagree

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All over the world
people
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 think that reading is more prons to our
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people
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 shout use up it more and more times. I totally agree with
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 and I will discuss it. On the one hand, these days
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 are very educated and they know how important it is.
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, they try to variety of methods.
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, ABC University of the UK they are doing an experiment
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 as fifty
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 a group for two weeks speaking and fifty
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 for two weeks reading.
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 after two weeks, they are looking for them. They convenient
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.
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, they decided that if
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 needed to improve that have to spend a lot of hours reading.
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, the same methods can be used in other ways like reading in the newspaper, or magazine, and can read stories like novels. If
someone
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 gets into the habit of it they can
increase
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 their level of
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skills
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. As an example,
someone
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 who reads the newspaper for habits. They read it every day in the morning they know about a lover in the world gossip and they can improve their vocabulary and how to manage sentences.
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, I think
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 should spend a lot of hours reading and increasing their lively
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skills
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, some of them wanted to
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skills
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. They speak to each other and listening
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 but they can learn
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 a minimum level.
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, my friend Nisha is always speaking with their workplace mam. But when she wanted to speak like a speech she could not do it. She is stuck somewhere. In my
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reading they can not stuck anywhere. In conclusion,
someone
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 who wants to improve a high level of
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 has to read more and more. If into the reading log time, they can
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skills
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Introduction
It's beneficial to start with a clear thesis statement that precisely states your position. This helps in guiding the reader through your argument.
Structure
To enhance the clarity and impact of your argument, consider organizing your ideas into clear paragraphs, each centered around a single main point. Use topic sentences to introduce these points.
Sentence Structure
Incorporate varied sentence structures to enrich your writing. This includes combining simple, compound, and complex sentences to demonstrate linguistic flexibility.
Supporting Information
To solidify your arguments, include a wider array of examples and evidence. This could range from citing reputable sources to including statistical data or anecdotal evidence.
Accuracy
Proofreading your essay to correct grammatical and spelling errors can significantly improve its readability and professionalism.
Position
You have clearly taken a position and maintained it throughout the essay, which aligns well with the task requirement.
Example
Your use of an example to support your argument (the ABC University experiment) is a strong strategy to demonstrate the effectiveness of reading.
Conclusion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your main points and reinforces your stance on the importance of reading for improving English skills.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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