the graph show the map of islip center. describe it
The two diagrams illustrate the
city
centre
layout of Islip and how it has changed between the current day and future development.
By comparing the two maps, it is clear that
Islip will undergo several developments along with
improvements to its social infrastructure which includes the construction of a new pedestrian street, a bus station, and a car park
.
Looking at the present map, the layout of the city
centre
seems very simple and underdevelop
. Change the form of the verb
underdeveloped
Firstly
, the most noticeable feature of the city
is that there are a lot of shops located on both sides of the main road. Also
, there are only the school and the park
near the housing area.
By looking at the second picture, it is clear that
the Islip urban area layout would be completely redesigned. First and foremost, a dual carriageway will make for the vehicles and it will surround the city
centre
. Secondly
, in the middle of the city
will build a bus station, car park
, and shopping centre
and make a street for pedestrians. Moreover
, the southern part of the map will add new housing. Also
, the park
and the school were linked by road.Submitted by wowoo04066 on
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