the graph show the map of islip center. describe it

The two diagrams illustrate the
city
centre
layout of Islip and how it has changed between the current day and future development. By comparing the two maps,
it is clear that
Islip will undergo several developments
along with
improvements to its social infrastructure which includes the construction of a new pedestrian street, a bus station, and a car
park
. Looking at the present map, the layout of the
city
centre
seems very simple and
underdevelop
Change the form of the verb
underdeveloped
show examples
.
Firstly
, the most noticeable feature of the
city
is that there are a lot of shops located on both sides of the main road.
Also
, there are only the school and the
park
near the housing area. By looking at the second picture,
it is clear that
the Islip urban area layout would be completely redesigned. First and foremost, a dual carriageway will make for the vehicles and it will surround the
city
centre
.
Secondly
, in the middle of the
city
will build a bus station, car
park
, and shopping
centre
and make a street for pedestrians.
Moreover
, the southern part of the map will add new housing.
Also
, the
park
and the school were linked by road.
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