the graph show the map of islip center. describe it

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The two diagrams illustrate the

city

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centre

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layout of Islip and how it has changed between the current day and future development. By comparing the two maps,

it is clear that

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Islip will undergo several developments

along with

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improvements to its social infrastructure which includes the construction of a new pedestrian street, a bus station, and a car

park

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. Looking at the present map, the layout of the

city

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centre

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seems very simple and

underdevelop

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Firstly

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, the most noticeable feature of the

city

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is that there are a lot of shops located on both sides of the main road.

Also

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, there are only the school and the

park

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near the housing area. By looking at the second picture,

it is clear that

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the Islip urban area layout would be completely redesigned. First and foremost, a dual carriageway will make for the vehicles and it will surround the

city

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centre

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Secondly

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, in the middle of the

city

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will build a bus station, car

park

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, and shopping

centre

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and make a street for pedestrians.

Moreover

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, the southern part of the map will add new housing.

Also

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, the

park

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and the school were linked by road.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, it is clear that".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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