Topic: robots and artificial are being developed to replace humans in the work place. Why this is happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?
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an era
the era
technology
, all human
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humans
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apply
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in
development and Change preposition
of
taking
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apply
measure
into Fix the agreement mistake
measures
human's
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human
life
from industrial technology
until nowadays. Robots
and artificial intelligence
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results as achievements but Change preposition
of
besides
, there is
still some issues that scientists can unexpected.
It must be understood that the appearance of Change the verb form
are
robots
with artificial intelligence
is turning
point of great change in awareness Correct article usage
the turning
as well as
recognizing the vastness of the world. Not at all, both them becoming a
crucial and useful supporters in our society Correct article usage
apply
such
as daily life
, factories, field of science and technology
. Furthermore
, in field
of science and Correct article usage
the field
technology
, many world scholars have been consulted and showed
lots of initiatives in order to Wrong verb form
shown
upgrading
the system of resolving and Change the verb
upgrade
caculating
with the ability to leverage data Correct your spelling
calculating
intelligence
that its
can serve Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
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apply
human's
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human
life
condition
. The noticeable examples include Spot and Stretch of Boston Dynamics, which Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
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the company
company
have manufactured in recent years and Fix the agreement mistake
companies
they
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apply
about
commerce.
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in
Conversely
, there are some problems of
using Change preposition
with
robots
in daily life
because many individuals rely on them too much with many hardly work as well
as
they Correct word choice
and
felt so
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feel
the
fact that Correct article usage
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robots
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for
abilities
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ability
of
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determinating
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determine
working
out the possibility of an incident occurring quickly, there are still some cases of errors Wrong verb form
work
occured
and Correct your spelling
occurring
malfunction
when established programs. Wrong verb form
malfunctioning
As a consequence
, not only caused many
damage to Replace the quantifier
much
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the economy
economy
market but Replace the word
economic
also
the safety of users. For instance
, AI intelligence
always
being profited for attacking Add a missing verb
is always
in
social media Change preposition
apply
as well as
controlling dwellers to deprivate
their freedom.
In conclusion, using Correct your spelling
deprive
robots
and intelligence
will be more and more benefits
to everyone if we use Replace the word
beneficial
it
to serve stringent Correct pronoun usage
them
life
condition
and Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
improving
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improve
economy
effectively. Meanwhile, many personal Correct article usage
the economy
organization
want to use Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
its
for inclement Correct pronoun usage
it
ambitious
.Replace the word
ambition
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