The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.
The given table indicates regional
imports
and catches of fresh fish in Use synonyms
Australian
city Correct article usage
the Australian
Perth
during the 10-year time period from 2004 to 2014.
When looking at the chart at first glance it is obvious that during the decade figures experienced fluctuations. It is salient to note that the highest total was in 2009 with 8949 metric Change preposition
of Perth
tons
Use synonyms
while
in 2004 Perth experienced the lowest total of 3142.2 metric Linking Words
tons
.
Over the period, from 2004 to 2008 the figure for local catches experienced an upward trend, having its peak in 2008 and Use synonyms
then
the figure gradually decreased. In the meantime, the figure for Linking Words
imports
was disproportionately low compared to locals. Use synonyms
However
metric Linking Words
tons
for Use synonyms
imports
had more Use synonyms
dramatical
fluctuations over the years Replace the word
dramatic
with
peaking in the year Change preposition
apply
of
2012 with 1227.3 metric Change preposition
apply
tons
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, we can see that the figures for local, Linking Words
imports
and total Use synonyms
differs
significantly. Change the verb form
differ
Linking Words
Moreover
local Add a comma
Moreover,
cathces
Correct your spelling
catches
surprasses
Correct your spelling
surpasses
imports
substantially every year.Use synonyms
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