The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol 

along with other financial information.
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The
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table indicates 10 countries with
most
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the most
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expensive
petrol
prices and gives a breakdown of average disposable income and its percentage spent on
petrol
. When looking at the chart at first glance it is obvious that Norway has the most
amount
of average monthly salary
while
Eritrea accounted for the minimum
amount
amongst their peers. It is interesting to note that,
while
Turkey had the least
amount
of monthly earnings, the
amount
spent on
petrol
in Turkey was the second largest on the table. What is most striking when looking at the data is the fact that the lowest average expenditure is in Belgium which accounts for 4th most monthly average earnings. When it comes to
percentage
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the percentage
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of salary spent on
petrol
, it is salient to note that, Eritrea registered the highest proportion out of their average monthly income in the meantime, Norway had the lowest figure with 61.10% and 7.40% respectively.
Overall
, there are dramatic differences in
percentage
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the percentage
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of monthly income spent on
petrol
in 10 countries and there are some shocking figures related to that.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • petrol
  • expensive
  • countries
  • financial information
  • average
  • prices
  • GDP per capita
  • income
  • data
  • currency
  • fluctuate
  • factors
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
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