The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishment for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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claimed a large number of lives nowadays.

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of severe

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drivers will help safeguard

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road users. I completely agree to a greater extent. The essay below will elaborate

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on the above notion. On one hand,

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of a jail sentence compared to a fine will greatly improve the safety on the streets, one will have to think twice before breaking any rules on the roads.

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individuals

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come from

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carry some cash so as to pay

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,

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means that they are intentionally breaking the rules

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of

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adhering

to them.

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unimaginable money will

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area,

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, if the fine was $30 it should be increased to about $400 which will make those depending on

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follow regulations.

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should get a long

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,

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is witnessed around the globe

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the young stars especially from rich families learn to drive from a very tender age because of

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of cars at their

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causing many accidents.

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to look into the traffic department

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pollice

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who are stationed in the avenues. I lived in South

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witnessed

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offenders or

law breakers

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lawbreakers

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would just bribe an officer without even thinking twice,

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to fire those workers who accept money as they increase these cases.

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of cameras will help tackle some safety concerns

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will make anyone behind the wheel and pedestrians to be cautious and know they are being recorded. In conclusion,

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agree to a greater extent that a harsher punishment will increase the safe use of roads. A sentence

instead

of a fine, increased fines and

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behind bars for driving without a licence will greatly help.

However

, we should look into the traffic cops and improvements on the roads will

also

provide security.