You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
People
think that the solution to solve the environment
problem is Replace the word
environmental
adjust
Fix the infinitive
to adjust
a
fuel price for Correct article usage
the
Add an article
the car
a car
car
and other vehicles. I strongly agree with the idea and my reason will be described in the following paragraphs.
It is undeniable that the most of pollution Fix the agreement mistake
cars
came
from Wrong verb form
comes
exhaust
from Add an article
the exhaust
the
vehicles on the road Correct article usage
apply
as a result
of effect
Correct article usage
the effect
to
climate change and Change preposition
of
ecosystem
. Correct article usage
the ecosystem
For example
, when people
use the
vehicles in the morning at the same time Change the word
their
caused
it Verb problem
apply
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
high
quantity of bad pollution and dust from Add an article
a high
emission
Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
so
Correct word choice
which
orgin
to Correct your spelling
contributes
the
global warming.
Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, increasing of
Change preposition
apply
Add an article
the price
price
will be helped to reduce Fix the agreement mistake
prices
a
number of Change the article
the
car
and many Fix the agreement mistake
cars
people
will choose public transportation such
as bus
, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
subway
, Fix the agreement mistake
subways
taxi
, Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
and
etc. or Correct word choice
apply
biked
a bicycle Wrong verb form
bike
instead
of private
Correct article usage
a private
car
for
save Change preposition
to
cost
. After that, when a human Fix the agreement mistake
costs
selected
the way it can Wrong verb form
selects
fixed
the issue which Change the verb form
fix
reduce
overcrowded on the street. Change the verb form
reduces
Furthermore
, it will reduced
the quantity of dust and Change the verb form
reduce
decreasing
in pollution when the number of Wrong verb form
decrease
car
Change to a plural noun
cars
was
Verb problem
has
dissappeared
from the road and especially, the government should be Correct your spelling
disappeared
managed
and Wrong verb form
manage
provided
the line of services of transport to Wrong verb form
provide
Add a missing verb
be convenience
convenience
and sufficient for Replace the word
convenient
population
in the city.
In conclusion, it is the best way to solve the problem because Add an article
the population
a population
while
the cost of fuel was
increased steadily it Verb problem
has
make
Wrong verb form
has made
people
turn to use
Wrong verb form
using
the
public transportation more than Correct article usage
apply
the
past.Change preposition
in the
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- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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