You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram explains the way in which
aluminium
can be recycled .
Overall
,what stands out from the picture is that the recycling process of aluminium
cans
is a cyclical process that consists of several main stages,including use,collection,cleaning,sorting,shredding,compressing,heating and melting,rolling,recycling and reusing.
In the first stage,after aluminium
cans
are used by consumers,they are discarded in recycling bins that are for aluminium
cans
only,waiting for trucks to transport them to the recycling centre .Once there,through the use of spevial
machines,Correct your spelling
special
cans
are cleaned to remove any residue after which they are sorted and those that can be reused are shredded and compressed .
Once the compressing step is over,these cans
undergo the melting stage,where they are heated to high temperatures.To subsequent this
step,melted cans
are rolled and their thickness varies between 2.5 mm and 6 mm.Finally
,they are recycled and three-quarters of all cans
become available for customers.After they are reused,they go through the recycling process all over again.Submitted by Name_1234 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words aluminium, cans with synonyms.
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