The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day.

The given maps compare the changes made to a university

campus

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from 2006 to the present day. There are five areas shown in the maps, including the Northeast, Northwest, Center, Southwest, and Southeast of the

campus

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Overall

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, the maps illustrate that significant developments have taken place

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the university

campus

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over time, with new buildings and facilities replacing the old ones. In the Northeast

area

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, the university offices have been replaced with a sciences building, and the teaching block has been transformed into an arts building. In the

center

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, a lake has been added to the

campus

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, replacing the previous lawn and seating

area

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. On the Northwest side, the student accommodation has been expanded with the addition of another building at the back. The Southwest

area

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now houses student facilities,

such

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as shops and offices,

instead

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of just student accommodation.

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, the Southeast

area

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, which previously had shops and restaurants, now accommodates students.

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Apr 2, 2024

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Vocabulary: Replace the words campus, area with synonyms.

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The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day.

6. (31/01/2015) Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some companies a typical working week has been reduced from 40 to 30 hours. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Many people believe that lecture halls have been replaced by online learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, people think women should have equality with men, in particular, equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the army. Others think women are not suitable for such jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.