The table below shows consumer spending on different items in 5 countries in 2022.

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The table illustrates the spending of consumers on 3 items in 5 nations by 2022.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in every country, they liked to use money for food, drink, and tobacco the most.
Subsequently
, the money for clothing and footwear was the second.
Finally
, the leisure and education free was the third. Looking at the table more closely, one can see that the
Turkish's
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food-related costs accounted
to
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for
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32.14% which was almost Spain's or Sweden's double. Ireland in
this
section was near to Turkey's, and Spain's was much below both of them. In the clothing and footwear category, Italy's
behavior
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stood out among those, and it got 9%. Others were around 5-6%. In the leisure and education part, 4.35% was the highest and it belonged to Turkey. Spain's spending was the lowest and the figure was only 1.98%. The percentages of
this
group in Italy and Sweden were nearly the same.
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