The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, between 2000 and 2010.
The given line graph displays information on the income of 3 different baking shops in London from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, while
Mari Bakeshop experienced a notable decline in annual earnings, the profit of the Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery grew significantly over the 10-year period.
Describing the analytical data, it can be seen that Amandine Bakery (green line) earned a similar amount of money in the first 5 years about 58000 dollars
and then
from 2005 it increased to 40000 dollars
by the end of the period. Following that, Bolo Cakery had the lowest income in the beginning, but the numbers rose gradually from 20000 in 2000 to almost over 60000 in 2010 in dollars
.Lastly
, Mari Bakeshop had the highest income among 3 shops in 2000. However
, the numbers of Mari Bakeshop profit fluctuated during the whole period and accounted for only 40000 dollars
in 2010.Submitted by 6atb8k on
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