You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The multiple bar chart compares the traffic among three museums in London from 2007 to 2012. The museums are the National Gallery, the
Victoria
and
Albert
Museum
, and the
British
Museum
.
Overall
, the popularity of the National Gallery rocketed up through the years, from being the lowest to the highest
number
of visitors
at the end
of the period.
However
, the
Victoria
and
Albert
Museum
and the
British
Museum
faced a fluctuating trend, the
number
of visits went down
then
bounced back in the middle of the period.
To begin
with, the National Gallery was the lowest with just over 5
million
people visited in 2007.
Besides
, the
number
was growing and reaching more than 15
million
in 2012. The traffic was approximately three times higher in the
last
year.
On the other hand
, the
Victoria
and
Albert
Museum
and the
British
Museum
experienced a fall down through the first four and three years, respectively. The
Victoria
and
Albert
Museum
was placed in the first rank in terms of
number
of visitors in 2007, with around 14
million
. Unfortunately, it decreased significantly to about 6
million
in 2010, but it managed to rise until hit 10
million
people in 2012.
Similarly
, the
British
Museum
started with approximately 11
million
visitors to only around 7
million
in 2009 and went up to nearly 15
million
in the
last
period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words victoria, albert, museum, british, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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