the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015
The given bar chart compares the proportion of
households
in the US by their annual salary in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Overall
, the number of households
who earned more than $100,000 increased in these 3 years
. On the other hand
, the population of people who had an income
less than $25,000 fluctuated in these 3 years
.
It is obvious, Correct word choice
that Us
Us
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US
households
who had an income
between $25,000 and $50,000 did not change dramatically. However
, we can see less than 15 million of
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households
in these three years
had an income
between $75,000 and $100,000.
It can also
be obtained from the chart that the number of households
who earned money between $50,000 and $75,000 in these 3 years
stayed steedy
around 20 million individuals. Correct your spelling
steady
Finally
, while
the number of richest households
in US
increased significantly, the proportion of Correct article usage
the US
households
with lower annual income
stayed stable in all three years
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