The graph below shows information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. write 150 words

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membership

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for both genders from 1980 to 2010. The units are measured in figures.

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, it can be seen that the

gym

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membership

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for men and women was equivalent in three different periods.

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, there was a sharp increase

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gym

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in the beginning,

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the female

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experienced a slight fluctuation.

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what is shown, in 1980, the

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of men was higher than women by about 1000,

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it was the opposite,

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of the given time.

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reached

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peak two

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, in 1985, at around 4000 and, in 2005, at approximately 5000.

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, it dropped dramatically to nearly 1500, in 1995, and it plunged again to less than 1000,

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fluctuated over the given period, where it peaked at about 2900, in 1995, which was larger than the male

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.