The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
The given two pie charts
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the breakdown of changes in world population by region in a century period from 1900 to 2000. When looking at the chart at the first glance it is
obivous
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obvious
that Asia and Europe had the biggest proportions out of the pies in both years. It is salient to note that the figure for both Asia (54% in 1900) and Europe (25% in 1900) decreased 6% and 11% respectively. What is most striking when looking at the data is the fact almost all pies had some differences in the names as there are some regions being added together or
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. Over the period, there were some variations,
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the percentages for North America and regions classified as others remained the same.
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, the rate for Latin America and Africa nearly registered
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the same increase by 5% and 6% respectively.
Overall
,
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there were many variances in both the names and the percentages
nevertheless
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not
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dramatic changes in the figures.
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