The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
The given two pie charts
indicates
the breakdown of changes in world population by region in a century period from 1900 to 2000.
When looking at the chart at the first glance it is Change the verb form
indicate
obivous
that Asia and Europe had the biggest proportions out of the pies in both years. It is salient to note that the figure for both Asia (54% in 1900) and Europe (25% in 1900) decreased 6% and 11% respectively.
What is most striking when looking at the data is the fact almost all pies had some differences in the names as there are some regions being added together or Correct your spelling
obvious
seperated
. Over the period, there were some variations, Correct your spelling
separated
separately
for
example
the percentages for North America and regions classified as others remained the same. Add a comma
example,
In addition
, the rate for Latin America and Africa nearly registered for
the same increase by 5% and 6% respectively.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
there were many variances in both the names and the percentages nevertheless
there was
Change the verb form
were
not
dramatic changes in the figures.Correct your spelling
no
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