Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending colledge or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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some of them tend to believe that it does not have the same advantages as attending college or university in person, Personally, I strongly agree and prefer to use learning methods, especially when I am at a distance, as they are more flexible and convenient than vice versa.
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will be trying to utilize the advantages that are received by the growing technology in order to broaden their links and networks worldwide. I am gaining time to do anything else Use synonyms
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, I pick to hang out sometimes and Linking Words
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will make me more convenient.
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Secondly
, I will be thrilled if I am able to work and study from a long distance using facilities Linking Words
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way
too far, Use synonyms
then
I will be in the online learning system, as Linking Words
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opportunity would not come twice for me. So, leveraging any merits in the modern era would make everything easier for me.
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However
, learning offline would be beneficial as Linking Words
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people
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as by mailing them to show appreciation.
In conclusion, I believe that living in the modern world would benefit us in many ways, particularly by giving us the opportunity to enjoy the online learning material system where we can enjoy doing our hobbies or allocate time to do anything like work to be more productive in any Linking Words
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