The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Write 150 words.
The bar chart provides key information about five industries, which support the economic status in Brazil across three different years. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it can be seen that the finance sector is the most significant one, as it provides the highest ratio of shares
to the economy throughout the given time. In addition
, finance accounted for the biggest proportion of shares
,in 2019, whereas
the lowest percentage of shares
was due to
manufacturing in the same year.
According to
what is shown, finance started, at roughly 32%, in 2009 and increased gradually to just over 35%, in 2019. After that, it is expected to rise to about 42%, in 2029. Food processing contributed by around 20% of shares
, in 2020, which was about twice its ratio, in 2009. In addition
, it is predicted to decline to approximately 10%, in 2029.
In terms of oil, coal and gas, they represented about a third percentage of shares
around 33%, in 2019, which was higher than its shares
, in 2009 by nearly 7%. Also
, it is expected to drop again to 25%, in 2029.Submitted by sm710129 on
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