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The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the diagram provides the flow chart for producing recycled
paper
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.
Overall
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, there are 4 main steps and 4 keys including unfiltered
pulp
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, filtered
pulp
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, ink and cleaned
pulp
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. It commences with making
pulp
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 and ends up making
paper
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.
According to
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 the information shown in the diagram,
used
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paper
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 will be put in containers and delivered on a conveyor belt before being added to
water
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chemcals
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chemicals
 for making
pulp
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.The
pulp
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 will be filtered by a filter through the filtering procedure. The next process is cleaning which the filtered
pulp
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 will be washed
by
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with
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water
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 and soap. After cleaning, ink on
paper
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 will be aspirated by an air pump and cleaned
pulp
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 will be added
into
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to
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water
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 and chemicals for
paper
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 making. There is a conveyor belt for cleaned
pulp
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 and heated rollers.What should be particularly mentioned is that there is some
water
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 aside
the
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from the
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 conveyor belt
due to
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 those heated rollers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, pulp, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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