The bar chart represents the number of travellers using three main airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000.
The bar graph illustrates how many people prefer
to
New York City's three main airports including John F. Change preposition
apply
Kennedt
, LaGuardia and Newark over a six-year period between 1995 to 2000. Correct your spelling
Kennedy
Overall
, Laguarda followed to upwarand
trend beside the other main airports
At the beginning Correct your spelling
upward
point
, John F.Keneddy
started to just over 25 Correct your spelling
F. Kennedy
million
visitors per year whereas
Newark figures were nearly half of the
Kennedy's airport passengers approximately 12 Remove the article
apply
million
in 1995. In 1996, Newark's visitors saw a gradual increase to around 22 million
of
passengers before remaining stable all Change preposition
apply
throught
period until 2000, which was a little more than 40 Correct your spelling
through
throughout
million
individiuals
. Correct your spelling
individuals
Although
, Kennedy was following
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followed
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upward
upwrand
trend until 1997 reached Correct your spelling
the
the
peak just above 50 Correct article usage
a
million
figure then
witnessed a gradual decrease, in ending point
was around 41 million
Laguarda figures experienced constat
growth rather Correct your spelling
constant
then
other airports. Replace the word
than
This
airport is only
airport Correct article usage
the only
did
not experience a downward trend. Started at just above 40 Correct pronoun usage
that did
million
plane-users
after that increased gradually to 50 Correct your spelling
plane users
million
users. When we reached the ending point
, Laguarda's figure experienced a significant increase to just above 70 million
of
people which is the Change preposition
apply
also
peak point
of Correct article usage
the all
all
bar Correct determiner usage
the
graph
.Fix the agreement mistake
graphs
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