The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

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the

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apply

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information about

vehicles

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vehicle

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changes

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travels

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travel

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in England

during

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between

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1985 and 2000. To overview, the cars,

long distance

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long-distance

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bus

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buses

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train

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trains

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taxi

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taxis

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, and other travel modes increased in 2000

while

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walking, bicycle, local buses

are

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decreased in

this

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year. In the beginning , during 1985,

car

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cars

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used

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were used

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major

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a major

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transport for

travels

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travel

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which was 3199 and rose in 2000

almost

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4806.

Long distance

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bus

also

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popular in 2000 and that was 124 from 54. In 1985

train

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the train

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and taxi used 289 and 13 for travelling but both gradually increased in 2000 which was 366 and 42.

Others

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transport

system

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systems

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also

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steped

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stepped

up in 2000 and that was 585 from 450.

On the other hand

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, walking

was

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slightly decreased in 2000 and came

237

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which was 255 in 1985.

Besides

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bicycle

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bicycles

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used

also

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falled

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fell

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same as walking. Local bus dramatically came to lowest

positon

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position

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which was from 429 to 274.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

New technologies and ways of buying and selling goods are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

As parents, they should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well and give them a better environment for growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is expected there will be a higher proportion of old people than young people in the future in some countries. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

In some places, young people find it difficult to communicate with older people. Why is this? What are the solutions? .