The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.

Write at least 150 words.
The table graph depicts
the
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apply
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information about
vehicles
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vehicle
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changes
of
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in
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travels
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travel
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in England
during
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between
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1985 and 2000. To overview, the cars,
long distance
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long-distance
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bus
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buses
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,
train
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trains
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,
taxi
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taxis
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, and other travel modes increased in 2000
while
walking, bicycle, local buses
are
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decreased in
this
year. In the beginning , during 1985,
car
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cars
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used
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were used
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as
major
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a major
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transport for
travels
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travel
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which was 3199 and rose in 2000
almost
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to almost
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4806.
Long distance
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bus
also
popular in 2000 and that was 124 from 54. In 1985
train
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the train
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and taxi used 289 and 13 for travelling but both gradually increased in 2000 which was 366 and 42.
Others
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Other
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transport
system
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systems
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also
steped
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stepped
up in 2000 and that was 585 from 450.
On the other hand
, walking
was
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slightly decreased in 2000 and came
237
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to 237
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which was 255 in 1985.
Besides
,
bicycle
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bicycles
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used
also
falled
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fell
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same as walking. Local bus dramatically came to lowest
positon
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position
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which was from 429 to 274.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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