The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.
The table graph depicts
the
information about Correct article usage
apply
vehicles
changes Change the noun form
vehicle
of
Change preposition
in
travels
in England Fix the agreement mistake
travel
during
1985 and 2000.
To overview, the cars, Change preposition
between
long distance
Add a hyphen
long-distance
bus
, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
, Fix the agreement mistake
trains
taxi
, and other travel modes increased in 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
while
walking, bicycle, local buses are
decreased in Unnecessary verb
apply
this
year.
In the beginning , during 1985, car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
used
as Add a missing verb
were used
major
transport for Add an article
a major
travels
which was 3199 and rose in 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
travel
almost
4806. Change preposition
to almost
Long distance
bus Add a hyphen
Long-distance
also
popular in 2000 and that was 124 from 54. In 1985 train
and taxi used 289 and 13 for travelling but both gradually increased in 2000 which was 366 and 42. Correct article usage
the train
Others
transport Correct quantifier usage
Other
system
Fix the agreement mistake
systems
also
steped
up in 2000 and that was 585 from 450.
Correct your spelling
stepped
On the other hand
, walking was
slightly decreased in 2000 and came Unnecessary verb
apply
237
which was 255 in 1985. Change preposition
to 237
Besides
, bicycle
used Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
also
falled
same as walking. Local bus dramatically came to lowest Correct your spelling
fell
positon
which was from 429 to 274.Correct your spelling
position
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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