You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

My dear friend. I hope my letter finds you in

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good health and spirits, I have read your letter, and I would like to give you some

advices

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. Actually, If

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were you, I would go to find a good job, As you know, after my

gradutaion

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graduation

, I decided to complete my high education directly

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and to be honest with you, It was difficult, I am

strugling

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struggling

now,

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feel it is boring

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because many classes and it is tough, so I don't want you to repeat my mistake, you have to search for a job,

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however

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you have to think about the money and your budget in future. I think that

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getting

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job

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a job

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now,

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is

good

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idea,

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you have to have experience and skills to face

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life,

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socially

to earn and save money. I suggest

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you

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get

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into

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business, i believe in your skills, you will be

good

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worker, because you already

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done

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in

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univercity

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university

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will

be improved

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, i mean you will be not

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same

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level

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if you

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take

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discioun. In conclusion,

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hope my letter will be helpful. Wish you all the best.