the chart below shows the changes in three different areas of cime in manchester city center from 2003-2012.

The following line graph depicts the

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changes in the

number

of various kinds of crimes in Manchester city

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from 2003 until 2012. Those crimes are burglary, car theft and robbery.

Overall

, we can observe that the

number

of

burglary

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have decreased substantially through

this

period, unlike

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car theft which increased until 2012. The

number

burglary was almost 3500 in 2003 and

this

number

slightly increased in 2004 and reached a peak of around 3750.

However

,

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the

number

of burglaries kept decreasing until 2008 and reached its minimum value which was

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slightly

more than 1000

cases

.

Finally

, until 2012 the

number

of

this

crime slightly increased and was almost 1500

cases

. The

number

of car theft

cases

stayed somewhat constant until 2008 with slightly more than 2000

cases

.

Then

this

number

kept increasing until 2012 and peaked at almost 3000

cases

. The

number

of robbery

cases

did not change a lot

throughtout

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throughout

this

period of time. Its

number

kept fluctuating between 500 and approximately 900

cases

from 2003 until 2012.