The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Map)

The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Map)
The maps depict the prediction plan of the biology school
in particular
university from 2015 to 2020.
According to
the figure,
it is clear that
there are some new facilities which will be constructed and connected to old buildings.
However
, some of them remain in the same place or change
its objective
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their objectives
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. In 2020, A central library, a cafe and an indoor sports hall
still
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are still
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located
at
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in
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the same place. At the top of the map, there will be deforestation and both a lab and an office will be constructed. A drama centre will become a music centre
instead
. A glance at the south side of the map, a forest which is located in the bottom left corner will be cut and replaced by a car park for the
staffs
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staff
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instead
. There will be a construction of both a teaching building and lecture rooms,
then
it will connect to the old ones. The IT centre will be extended and moved downwards.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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