Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

It is important to save wildlife from being endangered. A few environmentalists have taken action to protect species from extinct. I will discuss both points of view by including examples. On the one hand, some environmental scientists believe that
animals
kept in
zoos
are very safe.
Moreover
, it helps them with better medical facilities and keeps them safe from diseases
as well as
other
animals
and hunters.
For example
, in the UK there are hundreds of
zoos
to protect the wildlife and give them better breeding environments. They think that that way they can save any
animals
from extinction
such
as the Java Tiger. Some environmental specialists
also
add that in the future number of
animals
will increase and they can introduce new
animals
through
this
method.
On the other hand
, others think that
this
method will have more drawbacks.
Also
, it will destroy biodiversity and their food chains.
Animals
are habituated in wild environments, if we keep them in
zoos
they will lose their natural activities like breeding and eating.
For Instance
,
last
year a study was conducted by Cambridge University on how effects
zoos
on wildlife.
Furthermore
, those
animals
have been living for millions of years in the wild. when species are living in the wild they can fulfill their physical needs they can go anywhere they want. In conclusion, I would say that both have good points and drawbacks.
Animals
have lived wild for millions of years they have food chins and survival abilities it has been developed over the thousands of years. I think species in the wild would be better and healthier.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • eco-tourism
  • wildlife conservation
  • sanctuaries
  • habitats
  • ethical concerns
  • dependency
  • preservation
  • educational opportunities
  • economic benefits
  • isolation
  • intervention
  • overcrowded
  • finite resources
  • behavioral changes
  • conservation efforts
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