The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The chart below
showcase
four popular modes of transportation used by European workers Change the verb form
showcases
in
between Change preposition
apply
1960s
to 2000. In the earlier years, walking Change the article
the 1960s
through
distance was preferable to Change preposition
apply
commute
. Starting Replace the word
commuting
at
Change preposition
in
20th
century, the number of car Change the article
the 20th
owener rised
significantly and Correct your spelling
owners rose
popularized
Add a missing verb
was popularized
through
workers.
Through the early 60s, walking by foot is Change preposition
by
Correct your spelling
know
kno
Correct your spelling
known
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