The graph below shows the percentage of female students on four different courses at one university from 1970 to 2015.
The line graph compares the percentage of female learners of four courses at a specific college between 1970 and 2015.
To summarise, the percentages of students
joined
the four courses in the given period mostly increased, except the Correct pronoun usage
who joined
computer
science
. Despite the percentage of female students participated
in Correct pronoun usage
who participated
computer
science
course
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courses
is
the highest Wrong verb form
being
initially
, it was surpassed by others within 30 years.
The rate of low course
was only a quarter of Fix the agreement mistake
courses
computer
science
in 1970. However
, it dramatically increased since 1975,
and reached approximately 100% in 2015. The trend of Remove the comma
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computer
science
had a steady rise from 1970, but it declined to below 50% after 1990.
The percentage of female participants in medicine course
had stably increased throughout the given period, and it had over 75% in 2015. The rising trend of Fix the agreement mistake
courses
Correct article usage
the physic
physic
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physics
course
is comparatively smaller than the medicine and low course
, it only rose around 50% in the whole period.Submitted by siuboong on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, science, course with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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