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The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over among the US, Sweden and Japan.

The graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over among the US, Sweden and Japan.
#proportion #population #sweden #japan
The information about the percentage of
populace
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the populace
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having
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age
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aged
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 65 and above in countries
such
 as
US
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the US
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, Sweden,
Japan
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and Japan
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 is depicted in the given line graph. The information is calibrated in the form of
percentage
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. The most striking feature of the chart is that the maximum growth of population is seen in Japan,
while
 the resident's growth in the USA was
minimum
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minimal
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. In terms of Sweden, the number
pf
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of
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 people started with an initial figure of 7% in 1940
then
 increased and reached
at
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just below 15% in 1880 before inclining exponentially to 25% in the year 2040.
Furthermore
, in 1940,
population
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the population
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 of Japan accounted for 5% which fell significantly and remained
3
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% till 1980 and ultimately reached a peak at 27% in 2040. With respect to the USA, in the initial
years
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 it had
maximum
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a maximum
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 percentage of
population
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the population
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around
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 10%, and by 1980 its citizens reached to
one-quater
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one-quarter
.
However
, it later followed a declining trend and reached a
palteau
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plateau
 at just under 15% until 2020 before reaching
at
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23% in 2040.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • aged population
  • healthcare advancements
  • declining birth rates
  • elderly care
  • independence
  • quality of life
  • social cohesion
  • economic pressures
  • social policies
  • pension schemes
  • workforce participation
  • societal wellbeing
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