Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre - Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to bring to your attention
to
the planned closure of the sports and leisure Change preposition
apply
centre
in town.
It happens that it is the only working centre
in the area, and many people from the town and the closest neighbourhood, including me and my family, visit it to do sports, shopping and other activities. There is another centre
, hovewer
, it is almost a two-hour drive, Correct your spelling
however
hence
, by closing this
one the majority of the local community will lose their chance and possibility to do sport exercises and meet their friends there. Besides
, there are a lot of activities for children, hence
, families with children will be affected the most because they will not be able to attend them this
far from the town.
I look forward to hearing from you and I hope that in the given circumstances the centre
will not be closed.
Yours faithfully,
Natalia KraSubmitted by natallia.khrenava on
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