The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
The provided map depicts the comparison of a tiny local museum and the surrounding communities in the years between 1957 and 2007.
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can be split into two different time periods. It is obvious to see that in the past, the community was surrounded by nature. For the next 50 years, they were replaced by building constructions.
First of all, looking at the year 1957, at the bottom of the map there were lots of trees going along the street, and there was a small road cut inside to the community to reach the entrance hall. On the east side of the picture, there are three rooms, which have the local history, and national history, and the museum storerooms located at the beautiful view of the garden.
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On the contrary
, in the next 50 years, the constructions and nature zones were changed into a new look. The hall was still located in the same position as in 1957, but it was expanded into a bigger hall, in which some rooms had been added and removed. There is a cafe, reception, museum shop, local history, exhibition, and education centre. Linking Words
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, the road had been cut out from the main road. Linking Words
Lastly
, the gardening zones have decreased the size down, and the car park has been added .Linking Words
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