Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?
Management of
societies
to control populations are dynamic, Use synonyms
hence
changes are constantly required in order to guarantee equality. Linking Words
Then
, some proponents argue that governments are in charge of improvements among communities, Linking Words
while
opponents believe that people are Linking Words
also
responsible for them. I staunchly agree that either governors or individuals must take care of their countries by working as peers. In my contention, I support both ideas.
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To begin
with, it is well-known that governments make rules and outlaw many others regularly in response to crimes, social issues, etc. Linking Words
Then
, legislators try to control those detriments by declaring policies, Linking Words
thus
avoiding or decreasing either major or minor crime. Linking Words
For example
, "Transmilenio" is the least transportation used in Bogota, where hundreds of people are commuting every day and they should pay a minimum fare that was imposed by The Government. Linking Words
Otherwise
, in case of not paying, there are some fines and punishments. Linking Words
Hence
, politicians establish basic regulations to maintain basic order.
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However
, education and high values are required in all Linking Words
societies
because individual manners guarantee peaceful and empathetic communities. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, children should be taught not only by parents but Linking Words
also
by teachers about the importance of following rules and being respectful. Linking Words
For example
, in the same case in the aforementioned system of transportation, it has been proved that more than 60% of youngsters avoid paying the fee. Linking Words
Consequently
, there should be a balance between Linking Words
societies
and governments.
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To sum up
, creating and improving peaceful Linking Words
societies
with ethics and morals is a combined effort that should be done by ministers and persons, and both should recognize their importance and accomplish their respective functions.Use synonyms
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