The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
The diagram illustrates the changes in the area around a small local museum between 1957 and 2007.
According to
the figure, Linking Words
it is clear that
the local building has been expanded and new rooms are built. Surrounding trees are cut down Linking Words
while
the main road remains untouched.
Looking at the 2007 revised museum at first glance, there was an extension of special exhibitions and education centre room at the top Linking Words
as well as
a museum shop at the left. The local history area was relocated to the centre Linking Words
while
the exhibition and storage room were deleted. A cafe and a reception area were Linking Words
also
added at the bottom. Linking Words
Moreover
, the entrance was moved to the new shop.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, most plants and trees which once surrounded the building were cut. A path to the front door was demolished and replaced by a car park. A couple of trees and the garden still stood in the same place Linking Words
while
the tree which was at the top of the national history exhibition room was relocated to the bottom of the garden.Linking Words
Submitted by nnatthinee on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼