the chart below show the value of one country's exports in various catagories

the chart below show the value of one country's exports in various catagories
The chart gives information about the value of one country's exports in 5 different categories in 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, every sector except for Gems and Jewellery showed an increase in the percentage change in values.
Moreover
, the percentage change of textiles was around 5 times larger than the petroleum products.
First,
export
earnings
of Petroleum products illustrated a slight increase from 61
billion
dollars
to 62
billion
dollars
.
Likewise
, Engineered goods, which climbed 8.5% in value compared to the previous year, was 61
billion
dollars
in export
earnings
in 2016.
In contrast
, export
earnings
of Gems and Jewellery marginally dropped by 5.18%, but it was still the third largest export-earning sector.
However
, Agricultural products only rose by 0.81%, with around 30
billion
dollars
in both years. Notably,
earnings
through the exportation of Textiles depicted a dramatic increase. It was 23
billion
dollars
in the beginning and ended with more than 30
billion
dollars
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